Reviews for The Final Errand


Reviewer: Luna de Papel 
Date: August 21, 2013 11:43 AM 
Title: The Final Errand

The destruction of Thundera is always moving to me. I loved your version, it had that urgency about what had to be done versus, perhaps, what ideally would have been done... and a clicking clock taking chances away.
I'd eventually like to know what was to happen next. Eventually as in whenever you write it!
Thanks to Philip for recommending your story at the Library of Omens on Facebook.


Reviewer: Aria Moonsinger 
Date: July 01, 2013 12:42 AM 
Title: The Final Errand

Nicely written; I hope to see the story that this was a prelude to....

Reviewer: Philip Gipson 
Date: September 05, 2012 12:12 PM 
Title: The Final Errand

You did so well in capturing Thundera's destruction from mostly Jaga's viewpoint. His scenes with Claudus, Panthro, Nebulex (the Guardian of the Book of Omens), and young Lion-O were all written in character. This fic is both a prologue and a standalone for me. And so, I await future updates from you. =)