Table of Contents for What the Chain by Chiauve

Chapters: What the Chain by Chiauve

Story Notes:
Some Tygra/Cheetara in later chapters.

1. Acknowledgement [Reviews - 1] (2661 words)

2. Out of the Nest [Reviews - 0] (2953 words)

3. Stepping Up [Reviews - 0] (3269 words)

4. Bad Day [Reviews - 0] (2700 words)

5. The Perfect Weapon [Reviews - 0] (3394 words)

6. Sun and Earth [Reviews - 0] (3068 words)

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Reviews For What the Chain

Reviewer: Nine Tiger
Date: March 17, 2010 2:38 PM
Title: Acknowledgement

On Acknowledgement--I like the fact that your fic takes place on Thundera before the big boom. And your clan system is well thought out :)I will offer you a piece of advice which someone once offered me, and which I have found useful regarding point of view. In a chapter of a novel or a short story, consider who has the most too lose, and keep the POV on him. In this section, Cleatus clearly fits this bill. He is taking the loss of his name harder. If the only thoughts we see and hear are his own, it snares the reader because things are in sharp focus.

Great Start. :)

Marianne